Scribblez's little novel project

just wanted to see if my work is worth anything
please give me some feed back
its set up as a memory log of a soldier in the future after the zombie apocalypse
Talking about the events leading up to the apocalypse and the after effects it had on him. Enjoy, i hope XD

Data log Entry Number 50241
Soldier 5A12
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Hello,
my name is Vahn Kihar, or Soldier 5A12. I work for the Bio Tech Inc.
as, well a soldier. This Data log will be about my childhood, Frank
thinks it would be a good idea to let out held back emotions and would
like to get to know us more. I think hes just trying to find stuff
about us for black mail just incase we turn on them.

It was just
a regular day when things started happening. People falling asleep at
the wheel and crashing into shops or other cars. Nothing much to
really catch your eye you know. But here goes.

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"Vahn!!!!"
Mom called out to me ,"Get up your going to be late for school" I
rustled around in the covers "Ok ok im coming just chill." After
succesfully getting a hoodie and some jeans on I headed on out to the
Kitchen. The sweet aroma of bacon and eggs entered my nostrials and
awakend my stomach and my hunger. "Is any of that ready yet?"
"Sure
is dear, here have some" She handed me a plate full of bacon and a
little bit of eggs. After finishing off the eggs i hugged and kissed
her goodbye, not knowing thatd be the last time i did.

So After
riding the bus to school and getting my books out of my locker I walked
gloomfully to my Geometry class. I was halfway there when i heard the
scream of a thousand banshees in my right ear ,"VAHN!!!!" It was my
friend Jessi, she was a senior and headed to bigger and better things.
"Hey Jessi...."
"Aww whats with the long face?"
"Geometry..."
"Well all you need is a Jessi hug!"
She
hugged me and went off on with her joyful skip to class. So i continued
my way to Geometry. And the class well, i dont remeber it i slept
through it. Im not what you would call, a motivated student, just one
who tries to get by with the very least. After continuelly sleeing
through all my classes and finishing school, me and Jessi decided to go
for a walk in the park.

"I wish i could find prince charming you
know, im so sick of dating loser boy friends" She told me while i
pushed her on the swing, and i would think to myself, i would be your
prince charming. "I want a man who will treat me right, hold doors open
for me and just be the man i want you know?" and again i would think, i
would treat you right. After hours of just talking and talking and not
really saying anything Jessi asked me what time it was.
"Its about 8 or 9ish"
"Oh my gosh im late for my dads birthday party!"
"Dont worry i know a shortcutt to your house from here"
"Aww thanks vahn"
So
we headed off through the alleys, ducking under broke boards, climbing
over fences. Until we came across a man who was under a blanket. He
seemed to be in pretty bad shape. "sir?" Jessi called out to him ,"Sir
are you ok?"
He Started to moan and move around, I really didnt like
the idea of helping a hobo but she wanted to so i went along with it.
"Ok Vahn take those covers off of him," I did as she told me and i wish
i didn't. Underneath those cover was a hobo who had been gutted alive,
but the cuts and tears we like teeth marks, as if he had been eaten
alive. In fear Jessi grabbed hold of me and screamed in my right ear,
again.
"Vahn what do we do what do we do!"
"I dont know maybe get out?!"
As
we were discussing what to do, the hobo started to get up, blood
running down the side of his face and out of his.... well where his
belly was. So we in the blind fury of the moment we both took off
running, heading right back from where we started.

Bout twenty
minutes of running and two falls later we were back in the park. The
city was in a bit of a crisis and we knew it. The sky was filled with
smoke and all you could smell was burnt flesh. "Vahn we need to get
back to your house, its closer and wed be safer there" Jessi told me
and i agreed "Lets go"
My Dad had always told me that a real man
always carrys a knife with him wherever he goes. Im glad i listened to
him and carried one with me, that was the only defence i had to
whatever we would meet up with.

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I
was running in a blind fury with Jessica from a bunch of crazied
people. It was like a riot, but the people didnt carry torches with
them, they ran at screamed at us. We were going to my house and found
my mom lieing on the ground. She told me that some strange men were
beating on the door, as soon as she opened it they charged in and
started biting her. She said the neighbor heard her screams and helped
her get them out. And with that, she started to jerk and spit, and she
died. A few minutes later after her death she came back and bite Jessi.
And in fear we took off running and screaming. Mustof attracted
everyone.
"Ahh!" Jessi screamed as she fell.
"Jess no!!!"
"Go
without me!" she screamed as the mob drew nearer i couldnt do a thing,
well thats what i tell myself. So i took off running, not knowing were
i was headed, the tears and sweet in my eyes blurred my vision. After 3
minutes of running somithing hard hit me in the chest and i was knocked
out cold.

Thats where chapter two comes in
Data Log Entry 50256
Soldier 5A12
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Ok
so this is my secound Childhood memory log as you whoever who watchs
these logs shoould know by now, Memorys are forgotten, and when memorys
are forgotten you can almost never get them back, no amount of
technology can do that for you. None.

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"Jessi!"
I screamed as i awoke from my deep sleep. "Where am i?" I thought to
myself. It was a dark moist room, the smell of flesh was still in the
air. The room seemed to be what appears to be the Qwicki Mart down by
the hospital, the bars were on the windows along with some newly placed
boards. "You awake yet?" A voice rang out. "Yes, whos talking?"
"Your boy, Blane, im glad to see your alive man"
"Blane!" I wouldve never expected Blane to rescue me, "wheres Jessi?"
"Shes dead dude, she held the zombies back long enough for us to catch up to you"
"No..... it shouldve been me......"
"Dont talk like that man, be glad your alive, now come on" He hollered to me "Oris is up top searching for survivors"
My
Two best friends Oris and Blane, I've known them both for about 7 years
now, and i know theyd always have my back. Blane gave me the tour of
the store, he told me that they knew what was going .. anyone else did
and they started to load up on food and guns. They had looted 4 gun
stores and stole a couple trucks and one tanker to carry gas in, just
incase the worst happened.
They had a few more people with them but to be able to ration the food for long enough, they killed them.
"Theres
a..... wait nope dang dog got her" Oris called out to himself while we
climbed up the ladder. "Find any yet oris?" I asked him, "nah.. all i
found was you, your pretty lucky i was bout to go to bed" He told me in
a depressing voice. "Im sorry about Jessi bro.. but hey look on the
bright side, who else would you want to spend a zombie invasion with
huh?" "No one else" I said "No one else...."

We Had sat there
for 2 hours and we didnt save a single person, althought we did see a
couple of zombie bears, boy id be terrified if i ever got into it with
one of them. "So......" I said to myself "What if we sent some one out
there to look for people." Oris yelled at me "Are you crazy dude!!! I
am not going out there, its complete suicide" "Well were not getting
anywhere by just sitting here" I yelled back "Dont we have walky talkys
and some flashlights?"
"Yeah! what about them" He said.
"Well.... id be willing to go if you would keep a look out for me and Blane picked off any that came near"
"Are
you serious?" Blane asked. "Yeah man, we gotta do something and im not
going to wait to die" "man...." Oris sighed "You sure are one crazy
mother, but ok, im in.

So After a few beers from the cooler and
a good nights rest we got up in the morning. I was armed with a
semi-auto ak-47, a 12 gauge rifle, 2 9mm., and one hand grenade, just
incase i knew i was going to die. Right as they let me down the rope
ladder zombies from every corner were coming after me, so i hauled but
and climbed back up and we picked them off, after hours of endless
fire, we got them all. So a secound attempt was made. I got down the
rope and headed to the first Apartment Building. Almost every room had
a zombie in it, good thing i loaded up on ammo. I found one person who
was bitten, and he asked me to put him out of his misary, but before so
he gave me a picture. Told me it was his daughter, and if i ever saw
her to try to save her. And with that he laid back and said "Ready?
Aim. Fire!"

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"Come
with me now if you want to leave!" I yelled at the girl. I was
apartment building C in room 517. I found a survivor in the room,
there were 3 dead bodies. A mother, Father, and child. 2 Infected, one
killed before infection could take over. She must of came over alot of
hardships, but right now wasen't the time to worry about them. "Come on
now!" I kept screaming. Zombies were piling into the room through a
window. I unloaded my shotgun and reloaded while I tried to carry her.
"Put me down!!!" She screamed "I can walk im just... nevermind ok lets
go". I handed her my rifle "Here your going to need this"

C'mon Scrib, get to writing.. i want to read more!!!

haha you want more you say? i only got 5 chapters so heres the next one
but uhm, can i get a little more feed back Pwease
enjoy

Chapter 3


Data Log Entry 50261
Soldier 5A12
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Not much to say. Third log, just got back from a mission.

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"but...
but i dont know how to shoot a gun." She responded. Itold her "its
easy, just aim and pull the trigger" and with that we set off back to
the Qwicki. I remember that day as if it was yesterday. It was a cold
december afternoon. The sun had seemed to have dissapeared from the sky
behind the clouds, as if it didnt want to see what was taking place on
earth. We got to the corridoor and the emergency exit was barricaded
and wouldnt bug. "Looks like were going to have to take the long way" i
said under my breath. It was if every three steps i would hear a bang,
then a clank, people, well zombies locked in theyre rooms. Trying to
get out to us, to feed uponus.
Shrieks of
terror, blood upon the walls, help me written in blood, people chasing
after us. Blane was right.... This was suicide. The only way i can
really explain it is.... Well dwelling into the pits of hell. In hell,
theyres no one to save you, thats theo nly difference here.
We got
out of the apartment when i got a radio signal from Oris. *Static*"Get
your but back here now!" He was screaming into the radio. "Why whats
wrong?" "You got one of them bears behind you, about 50 yards back"
My
heart had stopped when i looked back. Coming at me was a 8 foot tall
bear, running at me. The side of his face was tore off, and hanging on
by a tendon. His arms were nothing but meat and bones, and the red fire
in his eyes was glowing. "Run...Now!" I hollered at the girl. And she
followed me. As we ran i heard bullets fly over my head. Blane was
shooting at the bear! I looked back and blane had hit the thing
inbetween the eyes. but it was still running after us, so more bullets
flew and flew. Halfway back he finally dropped, but we didnt stop there
we had attracted more zombies with all the racket we caused. I lead the
girl back to the Qwicki and took off running. "Vahn were are you
going!!!! Vahn!!!!" Oris and blane screamed in unsion. I was going to
lead the zombies away from my friends. "Ill meet up with you later,
just be safe!" I radioed back. And i was off, running at a dead sprint
like the night i left Jessi for dead.
The only sounds i could
hear were bullets whistlening above my head, the screams and moans of
the dead, and my heart beat. It was if minutes were passing like hours.
And hours werer days. On occasions i was able to aim behind and knock
some back, and with theyre fall, theyd trip a few more. At the same
time when i would cut corners they would be another pack sitting there
awaiting more victims. After awhile it was just a deathly silence,
there was no noise. I couldnt hear, i couldnt see, i just did.
Aftermaybe two hours of this i came upon signs saying, HELP THIS WAY,
with an arrow pointing north. There were also the signs saying, this is
what we deswerved, pray while you still can, and its our fault. They
were all s igns from different religions, and i wouldof payed more
attention but i had a hoard behind me and had to go, so i followed the
sign telling me to go north. I could see the outpost at an
intersection, but no one was in sight. I ran up to the place, and there
were 12 armored vehicles, usedas a wall. All loaded with medicines and
guns. One in the middle had a giant gatling gun, Iapproached it and a
black man popped behind me with a pistol to my head.

"State your
name and why your here!" The mysterios man ordered. Apparently he was
with the military. "Vahn Kihar, to lead a hoard away from my company
sir!"
"Your &%@in kidding me"
"No sir"
"Here take this" He
said as he handed me a shot gun with an extended clip. I tried to say
something but he yelled " You want some more you bunch of S.O.B.s!?
come and get it!" He had climbed aboard the OneVehicle with the Mini
gun and started to fire. With outany preparation or thought i opened
fire on them too.

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"Mommy can i pwease have a cookie?"
"No dear, theyre really hot"
"But i want one now!..... Ouch hot hot!!!"
"Hah i told you, here let me kiss your boo boo and make it better"
"Thanks mommy i wuv you"

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